http://www.sloh.org/children-athletics/
If this good introduction for a persuasive essay?
The issue I am writing, is the benefits of sport for children. This is my introduction my persuasive essay. What do you think of that? What else should I add that? Participation in sports provides opportunities for leadership and socialization and the development of skills for handling success and failure. While long known that children can benefit from participating in sports equipment, some parents still believe that the benefits are insufficient to enroll children in sports. Research shows that participation in the Sport can promote healthy development in young children physically, mentally, spiritually and resistant to participate in youth sports.
Two corrections are in their youth and sports for youth sports. I guess it's in grade seven-eight, if so, this should win a mediocre score. Good luck.
Sonja Brummer • Children’s Athletics • Amazing Athletes